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Halaman pembicaraan baru. -Fetus Lyly (bicara) 17 Juni 2021 07.18 (UTC)
Peningkatan kualitas artikel
[sunting sumber]Halo para kontributor, saya mohon izin untuk menyunting artikel RSPI secara mayor. Pasalnya, isi artikel cenderung tidak ensiklopedis dan rawan dihapus oleh pengurus. Meski berstatus rintisan, tentu tetap harus ditulis dengan gaya yang sesuai dengan kaidah Wikipedia. Pencantuman referensi misalnya. Selain itu, paragraf berikut ini:
- Rumah sakit ini mempunyai fasilitas dan pelayanan kelas atas sehingga biaya pelayanan di rumah sakit swasta ini relatif mahal dibanding rumah sakit lain. Target market rumah sakit ini adalah kalangan ekonomi kelas atas dan juga ekspatriat/WNA.
Terpaksa saya hapus karena tidak relevan dan kurang sesuai dengan pedoman kuantifikasi yang ditetapkan Wikipedia, serta mengandung opini dan riset asli—artikel pada situs Lifepal tidak sepenuhnya dapat dijadikan referensi, sebab akan bermasalah jika ditulis dengan gaya yang sama. Penggunaan sudut pandang netral diperlukan dalam menyunting artikel Wikipedia agar terhindar dari frasa berbau opini seperti "fasilitas dan pelayanan kelas atas" dan "relatif mahal".
Sementara itu, judul artikel saya kembalikan ke versi awal (tanpa pengulangan kata Pondok Indah) karena bertentangan dengan Wikipedia:Pedoman gaya, tepatnya pada bagian Prinsip Umum. Perihal sebagai pembeda dari cabang RSPI yang lain, menurut hemat saya tidak perlu karena cukup dengan dijelaskan pada bagian lain artikel. Apabila mengacu pada situs resmi RSPI, pengulangan keterangan tempat beserta tanda hubung memang digunakan, akan tetapi hal itu tidak dianjurkan karena tidak diatur dalam PUEBI.
Terima kasih atas kerjasamanya. Salam, Fetus Lyly (bicara) 17 Juni 2021 10.00 (UTC)
External links found that need fixing (Oktober 2023)
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External links found that need fixing (Oktober 2024)
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Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Melaporkan kesalahan) 21 Oktober 2024 16.13 (UTC)