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Pembicaraan:Salma Salsabil

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Perbaiki gaya penulisan di halaman ini

[sunting sumber]

Saya ingin memberikan masukan terkait halaman Salma Salsabil. Saya menghargai kontribusi yang telah dilakukan untuk membuat halaman ini, namun saya menemukan beberapa masalah dalam penyusunan kalimat dan gaya penulisannya. Saya berharap halaman ini dapat diperbaiki untuk meningkatkan kualitas dan kemudahan baca.


Berikut adalah satu contoh kalimat di halaman ini yang perlu diperbaiki:

  • "Salma berada dibawah naungan perusahaan rekaman Universal Music Indonesia dan telah merilis lagu kemenangan sekaligus singel perdananya bertajuk 'Menghargai Kata Rindu' pada 19 Mei 2023" - Kalimat ini terasa ambigu dan sulit dipahami maksudnya.


Saya ingin menyarankan beberapa perbaikan:

  • Memperlihatkan kejelasan kalimat dan menghindari penggunaan kata-kata yang ambigu.
  • Menggunakan gaya penulisan yang lebih ringan dan mudah dipahami agar pembaca lebih tertarik.
  • Mengecek dan menghapus pengulangan kata-kata yang tidak perlu untuk meningkatkan aliran bacaan.


Saya berharap Anda dapat mempertimbangkan masukan ini dan melakukan perbaikan yang diperlukan. Jika diperlukan, saya juga siap membantu dengan memberikan contoh perbaikan lebih lanjut. Ikzelf Kurniawan (bicara) 5 Juni 2023 19.49 (UTC)Balas

[sunting sumber]

Hello fellow editors,

I have found one or more external links on Salma Salsabil that are in need of attention. Please take a moment to review the links I found and correct them on the article if necessary. I found the following problems:

When you have finished making the appropriate changes, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information to fix any issues with the URLs mentioned above.

This notice will only be made once for these URLs.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Melaporkan kesalahan) 15 Oktober 2023 03.20 (UTC)Balas

[sunting sumber]

Hello fellow editors,

I have found one or more external links on Salma Salsabil that are in need of attention. Please take a moment to review the links I found and correct them on the article if necessary. I found the following problems:

When you have finished making the appropriate changes, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information to fix any issues with the URLs mentioned above.

This notice will only be made once for these URLs.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Melaporkan kesalahan) 15 November 2023 23.01 (UTC)Balas

[sunting sumber]

Hello fellow editors,

I have found one or more external links on Salma Salsabil that are in need of attention. Please take a moment to review the links I found and correct them on the article if necessary. I found the following problems:

When you have finished making the appropriate changes, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information to fix any issues with the URLs mentioned above.

This notice will only be made once for these URLs.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Melaporkan kesalahan) 11 Desember 2023 19.22 (UTC)Balas

[sunting sumber]

Hello fellow editors,

I have found one or more external links on Salma Salsabil that are in need of attention. Please take a moment to review the links I found and correct them on the article if necessary. I found the following problems:

When you have finished making the appropriate changes, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information to fix any issues with the URLs mentioned above.

This notice will only be made once for these URLs.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Melaporkan kesalahan) 5 Januari 2024 11.06 (UTC)Balas

[sunting sumber]

Hello fellow editors,

I have found one or more external links on Salma Salsabil that are in need of attention. Please take a moment to review the links I found and correct them on the article if necessary. I found the following problems:

When you have finished making the appropriate changes, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information to fix any issues with the URLs mentioned above.

This notice will only be made once for these URLs.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Melaporkan kesalahan) 5 Mei 2024 08.23 (UTC)Balas

[sunting sumber]

Hello fellow editors,

I have found one or more external links on Salma Salsabil that are in need of attention. Please take a moment to review the links I found and correct them on the article if necessary. I found the following problems:

When you have finished making the appropriate changes, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information to fix any issues with the URLs mentioned above.

This notice will only be made once for these URLs.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Melaporkan kesalahan) 7 Juli 2024 03.55 (UTC)Balas

[sunting sumber]

Hello fellow editors,

I have found one or more external links on Salma Salsabil that are in need of attention. Please take a moment to review the links I found and correct them on the article if necessary. I found the following problems:

When you have finished making the appropriate changes, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information to fix any issues with the URLs mentioned above.

This notice will only be made once for these URLs.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Melaporkan kesalahan) 7 November 2024 15.08 (UTC)Balas